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i think your doing a wonderful job. :D you really pull the reader in and make them want to finish reading to see what happens next. you show a good amount of emotion in the bots which really stirs readers in to feeling like they're right there with the bots and it makes the transition of viewpoints rreally easy where your not getting ost and having to reread sections. i hope you continue on this because you are a very talented reader and show exceptional skills in your writing ability. do continue and once again great job :clap: im really excited for your next chapters
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